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Myths of Exile

Stories within stories within stories

There is a Garden

In the Garden, there is a Tree

In the Tree, there is a Snake…

The Snake loses his speech

The animals all lose their speech

Tongues now silent

Where once they sang the praise of the Divine

The Divine regrets the silence

The Snake pushes the Woman

The Woman tricks the Man

no

The Woman tempts the Man

no

The Woman loves the Man

The Snake transforms

He loses his legs

He crawls

no

He grows

Sprouting the wings of an Angel

The Woman sees the Angel

The Man sees the Angel

The Angel sees the Garden

Not for the first time

There is a River

Outside the Garden

The Garden is fillled

With treasure and wondrous things

The Divine urges the Man to go

To see the World outside the Garden

The Divine is sad to see him go

The Divine regrets

no

The Divine retreats

The Man takes a diamond

The Angel pushes him

The River is full of diamonds

The Divine has been hurt before

The Divine always tries again

The Snake, the Angel

A River full of diamonds

Where is the anger of the Divine?

The Snake pushed the Woman

The Angel pushed the Man

The diamond fell

The fruit fell

The Snake

no

The Angel fell

Stories within stories within stories

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